Re:Dairy Care
Jim 2010/2/8 (Mon.) 09:15:58
Very interesting! I'm digging the open pants and how soft and squishy the nipple is - like it's a giant boob-shaped water pistol made out of rubber and felt. In fact, the whole pic is soft and squishy - the colours and pencils make a nice change from the blocky pixellated pics you often end up with when using the oekaki (no offence to you blocky pixel artists, mine turn out like that too!).

Re:Dairy Care
SoylentOrange 2010/2/8 (Mon.) 09:50:40
Nicely done! It seems no matter what you do you never lose that airy, etheral quality to your work.

Great job! :D

Re:Dairy Care
Sirkusphreak 2010/2/8 (Mon.) 16:58:00
I'm really loving these. PLEASE keep it up! I might have to start pestering you for a request or 2 soon, haha. :3

Re:Dairy Care
anon 2010/2/8 (Mon.) 17:17:06
nICE

Re:Dairy Care
Ryohji [Home Page] 2010/2/8 (Mon.) 07:25:58
If Suti could delete this one, I'm uploading a larger version. Thank you.

Re:dulce sue醇oos
Osborne 2010/2/7 (Sun.) 16:49:40
She can literally go to sleep anywhere she wants since she totes around her own portable pillows.

She's as cute as a button in this in contrast to the chaotic and sexy nature of the other drawings.

Re:Muy pequeño
_ 2010/2/6 (Sat.) 13:11:10
If this is small, I look forward to large!

Re:Muy pequeño
. 2010/2/7 (Sun.) 07:42:54
I'm starting to like this strange black and white anime girl. She's growing on me.

Re:Muy peque醇oo
Osborne 2010/2/7 (Sun.) 08:08:48
My last statement stands corrected. But not only will I dive into those breasts, but I shall SWIM in them as well!

She's quite the zany one, especially since I assume she can grow those tits to any size she wants, considering she calls this her small size. Indeed, I look forward to large mode as well!

Re:ellos
Osborne 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 10:04:40
Other than the fact that her right shoulder is ridiculously broader than the other, I think it's fantastic. I really can’t express how dead sexy this character is, and I’m not saying that because of her massive jugs I just want to dive into and squeeze as much of them in my arms as I can. Though I’d be kind of hesitant to, considering there are two spirits behind her. . .

Re:ellos
Francis 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 20:21:17
oh room-filling boobs, i LOVE them! :-D

Re:ellos
Jim 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 21:29:10
¿Quién son ellos?
¿Fantasmas de tetas? XD

I love the style, it's simple but cute.

Re:Framed
SoylentOrange 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 18:21:24
Hey, not bad!

Glad to have you, keep up the good work!

Re:Framed
Jim 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 20:26:57
A solid improvement over your last attempt, sir!

Don't fret about using the curve and shape tools, especially if you're a novice to this, because it'll help you get used to the oekaki program faster. Anyway, I'm pretty sure Woot uses them too! It's difficult to make a pic without them - I do the majority of my pics freehand, but that's because my art style aims to be messy and formless.

I think the only quibble here is with the colour. I'm no expert at it, but maybe adding some light and shading would give your pics more edge? :)

Re:Framed
_ 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 01:27:14
I love it when titties hang out the bottom of a shirt like that! The only thing I would change here, is that her shirt's neckline is low-cut enough that we should be able to see some cleavage.

Re:Framed
That Guy 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 05:32:33
The only real issue I have with it is that the top doesn't seem 'right'. I think there should be at least a little indication that there are two large shapes that the fabric is over. Some indication that the middle of the shirt is going "into" the drawing would help.

Not to mention that if she wasn't so busty before, that neckline would be down at her navel.

She's a very nice big gal, though. And she's got legs capable of supporting her mass, and a bit more besides.

Re:Framed
tpdp 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 06:03:07
There are rules for this board (lost to the mists of time, perhaps? one of them was "no puss"), but there's no such thing as "cheating" by using any tools here. You can even upload a file you actually completed in Photoshop... if you feel so inclined, anyhow.

Re:Framed
Osborne 2010/2/6 (Sat.) 05:28:33
@Jim
I’m relieved to know I’m not making a mistake by using the tools put before me, and it was probably silly of me to worry about such a thing. As for shading and lighting in drawings, I’ve been neglecting to put them in my pieces for some time now. I guess it’s a good a time as any to give it a go.

@_
I was going back and forth on what looked right with that shirt on, whether her cleavage should be showing or not. But now that it’s been mentioned, I will certainly take note of it.

@That Guy
I agree with you when you say the top is crappy. Mostly because I figured I can get away with the logic that the breasts are so big that the shirt just drapes over them. Personally, looking at it, it looks more like a lampshade for breasts than a comfortable low-cut tee. Much as I like to think I did a good job applying a sense of gravity to her round tits, I was careless in applying it to her shirt. Thanks for pointing that out.

@tpdp
Call me Captain Obvious, but I have a sneaking suspicion that the great artists that come to this board already have their pictures ready for upload after they’ve taken the time to draw and finish their pieces on their own programs. As much as drawing on the spot in the forums program is challenging on its own, I’ve been thinking about uploading pieces completed in OpenCanvas to the board. I guess we’ll see what turns up.

It’s odd seeing an absence of a list of rules here, but thanks for that little bit of information.

Re:You Like it. Don't you ?
Sirkusphreak 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 10:50:20
You better do it again, cause this picture is awesome, even if they're not the usual huge boob style (i love boobs but art style > boobs)

That being said, glad to see you back! How have YOU been? :D

Re:You Like it. Don't you ?
Jim 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 12:27:02
The BEAvenger? Now where have I heard that name before...? X3

This pic is very soft and has some nice "warmth" to it... I love the face as well, she's very cute :D It seems like you went for an anime style on the eyes but a western style for the rest of her features and that blends together well.

Re:You Like it. Don't you ?
Osborne 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 13:18:14
The use of the watercolor tool makes this piece incredible to look at. The thing I adore most is the hair, but the part that rubs me the wrong way is the blush. Simply because it looks more like makeup than flushed skin. It's a teensy thing that could've been improved upon or gone without, but either way the piece is fucking brilliant.

Re:You Like it. Don't you ?
SoylentOrange 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 18:22:30
Oooh, nice!

A bit modest for the 'stand, but love your pencilwork. :D

Re:You Like it. Don't you ?
Ryohji [Home Page] 2010/2/5 (Fri.) 03:46:28
Yes indeed, the blushing is not that good, I admit but thanks for having spoted that.

Re:Tits
Sirkusphreak 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 16:10:37
It could use some work, but it looks like you have a great base style to work off of. There's a lot of potential there, so please keep with it. I'd love to see more. :D

Re:Tits
Muhznit 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 16:50:03
lol, everyone loves the way woot draws eyes to the point of emulation. Including me. <_<

Re:Tits
Sirkusphreak 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 17:29:18
It can't be helped, he has a very nice art style as far as eyes goes, but even then he had to pick it up from somewhere. Some greats create, and others emulate. In the end as long as it comes out nice then that's all that really matters, and I think Osbourne has a lot of potential.

Re:Tits
SoylentOrange 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 19:59:32
Very nice! Nice and squishy. :)

Re:Tits
Jim 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 22:56:20
Personally I think the nose needs work rather than the eyes. Tiny circles like that remind me of a furry snout; in addition it seems to be a little too far over her cheek and right under the eye.

But that's the only quibble I have. Anime eyes are hard to draw without copying from somebody else so I can't call you out there, and the hair is nice; simple but messy. The background adds an abstract touch too. Keep at it! *thumb up*

Re:Tits
tpdp 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 01:19:03
What bothers me here is the double chin that doesn't look like a real double chin. A typical anime chin is drawn tapering to a point to mimic bone structure. Now, there is a bit of a knob on real chins, but it's not usually seen in cartoons (especially in the anime style); the so-called "double chin" is a problem between the bone of the chin and the neck.

There are plenty of niggles I could elaborate upon, but that's not really what I'm going for since I like the picture as a whole; I'll just leave it at this one I can't leave alone.

Re:Tits
Jim 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 04:00:38
@tpdp: I'm not seeing a double chin at all. If you mean the little line under her mouth, that's probably her bottom lip; although you don't see that often in anime art, a lot of non-Jap artists do it anyway. Her chin itself is fine - if it looks weird it's probably because she looks like she's sinking her head a bit (she's slouching, maybe?) and as a result you can't see her neck.

Re:Tits
tpdp 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 05:39:22
Bottom lips don't smile when you frown. Of course, if it is one, it's missing the line in the middle for the mouth and engenders visual confusion. _That_'s what bothers me.

Re:Tits
Jim 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 06:07:13
Well, Osborne did say when he posted it that he wasn't pleased with it; hopefully our criticism just doesn't discourage him :O

Re:Tits
Sirkusphreak 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 07:38:13
The bottom line is supposed to signify a full lip i'm thinking. I have no problems with it and I understood what it was right away.

I suppose the nose could use a bit of work, but I like the direction he took with it.

Re:Tits
Osborne 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 11:25:20
As I've said, I don't like the way this drawing turned out at all, as I am by no means good at drawing things on the spot in a forum based sketch'n'show, or Oekaki for that matter. Generally, I’m used to drawing things on paper before scanning it in to touch it up. But I’ve been lurking on here for awhile now, and finally I just said “what the hell” and started posting. However, I wasn’t aware that it was going to get that much reception. (Maybe because I fooled everyone by making them think this was a new Woot piece. Sorry. :P )

@Muhznit
Yes, the eyes are a Woot copy, and I figured as much that was going to be the thing people that recognize the most. I don’t really mind that unless the artist who created the style has a problem. In my opinion, they’re the easiest type of eye to draw because they are consistent in shape and presence on the face. I just love the way he draws eyes, so I started drawing them in my pictures.

@Sirkusphreak
You bring up a very good point. People have to start somewhere, even if it means copying another. It all depends on if the artist grows from there. Thanks very much for the encouragement.

@Jim
You’re not the only one. The noses or “Kitten Noses” I’ve drawn on people have bothered countless of others, and I should probably take an initiative to change that. In the very least it’s a far cry from the triangular Lois Griffin noses I used to draw on people when I first started out. I also see what you mean by the nose being too far off to the side, it’s something I noticed when I drew it and not proud of.

Yes, she’s slouching. Maybe because she’s uncomfortable doing nude photo shoots. :3

@tpdp
It took me a few reads and Jim’s comment to realize that it’s the girls bottom lip that you were talking about and I couldn’t agree more. The thick “ghetto lip” could be mistaken for a double chin because I didn’t color in a lipstick or fleshy color, and that was another big mistake I made. Anatomy was another thing I didn’t keep in mind, so I apologize if I offended you at that little bit. ( But very ironic, considering the size of her breasts. )


I don’t mind critiques at all, and the ones displayed here in this thread have been very friendly, informative and constructive. As a matter of fact, you guys are the only people so far that gave a damn enough to say something in order for someone else to improve. So really, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. It only becomes criticism when people become angry and tell someone to just stop drawing altogether, and I’m just thankful I don’t get any of that at all.

Sure, I’ll stick around. ^ _ ^

Re:Tits
Jim 2010/2/4 (Thurs.) 12:14:34
Commendable of you to take criticism in stride, sir. I can only assume people don't comment on my art because they've clicked I draw so shittily on purpose :D But we can see you have potential and more importantly the will to improve, which is necessary to achieve high status in today's thriving BE community. Keep on plugging!

On a side-note, it's interesting, to me at least, that while Woot takes an extended vacation, the amount of other artists posting here suddenly increases. As soon as he returns we're all gonna have to go back to our normal lives XD

Re:Felicidad
Osborne 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 05:56:10
Is a warm gun?

Loving this character so far. I would enjoy seeing more of her. Nice work!

Re:Peque醇oo gatito
No One Important 2010/2/2 (Tue.) 08:20:57
I wanna be the cat!

Re:Peque醇oo gatito
Osborne 2010/2/3 (Wed.) 06:19:02
I don't care how much they weigh! To be buried under all that heaven must feel fantastic.